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May 31, 2011

Writing Sample

Monkey's homework this week is to rewrite a sample she did on May 16:

When my cosents met me they met me when I was a baby. They are my first firends. There names are Tim and Jasen. I really miss them a lot. I wish my cossent lived with me and had a big family. I want to see them for every because there my firends. We like a chother because we play game like Micle Jacksin. Jasin said do you want to atack Tim me and my little sister said yes but we did not atack him. Jasin is 16 years old Tim is 10 years old. There bigger then me. So we went home to take a bath then we went to in our own rooms and read a little bit then we went to sleep. And I will see he some other time. I wish they were my brother. And Im there sister.

Okay, looks like we have a lot of work to do this week.

Posted by Mike at May 31, 2011 08:20 PM


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